4. Show, Don’t Tell: Elevate Your Writing with Visual Storytelling

The secret to engaging readers through actions, not just words

Why "Show, Don’t Tell" Matters

"Show, don’t tell" is crucial because it helps create a connection between the reader and the characters. When you tell the reader that a character is scared, for example, you’re providing information, but it remains at a surface level.

However, when you show that same character with trembling hands, wide eyes, and a heart that feels like it might leap out of their chest, you allow the reader to experience the fear alongside the character. This shift transforms readers from passive observers into active participants in the story.

By showing rather than telling, you make your writing more dynamic and engaging. You give your readers the space to draw their own conclusions, creating a sense of discovery and involvement that keeps them turning the pages. I can’t stress how important this approach is.

How to "Show" Instead of "Tell"

1. Use Sensory Details

   One of the most effective ways to show rather than tell is by tapping into the senses. Think about how a moment feels, looks, smells, sounds, and tastes. Instead of saying, "It was a cold day," show how the character experiences the cold: The wind bit at her cheeks, and she pulled her coat tighter, her breath fogging the air with every exhale. By focusing on the sensory details, you help the reader experience the moment in a visceral way.

   
   

2. Show Emotions Through Actions

   Rather than telling readers how a character feels, reveal emotions through their actions and body language. For instance, instead of saying, "He was angry," show the character’s clenched fists, gritted teeth, and the slight tremor in his voice. This allows the reader to infer the emotion from the behaviour, creating a much more powerful impact.

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